I choose my fiction story because it feels like it was my best piece. Creating a good character is important. The main character was John. He had blue hair and blue eyes and he always wore a sweatshirt. The sweatshirt was blue and it had a zipper. Austin had red hair and brown eyes.
Authors create setting. The setting was at John’s house and in his development. The story map is my character’s desires to stop the zombies and to get to nuclear power plant. The obstacle that was in my character’s way was zombies. The zombies where guarding the nuclear power plant. The climax was when they went down to the nuclear power plant and they can’t get there because there is too many zombies and when they can’t get in the house because it is locked.
My resolution was when it was morning and they ran down to the nuclear power plant to get what was ever down there and John tripped and fell out of his bed and went down stairs and he hear the doorbell rings and it was Austin and John said, “Oh no”. I have improved as a writer. I have more confidence. I feel comfortable writing longer pieces. I understand the parts an author needs to write fiction. I enjoy writing more.
It is Saturday. John woke up in his room and got ready. John had brown hair and blues eyes. He wore his sweatshirt and went down stairs. He asked his mom if he can have Austin over. “Ok John,” mom said.
Austin’s mom pulled up the drive way and Austin ran to the door. John opened the door and he came in the house. “Austin do you want anyone else to come over,” John said.
“Ok. How about Carson and Jordon?” Austin said. “Ok I will go ask my mom,” John said. “Hey you both are here already,” John said. “So what do you want to do?” Austin said. “How about manhunt?” Jordon said. “Sure,” Carson said. “Ok. The teams are me and Austin and Carson and Jordon. Austin and I will be hunter. Go hide” John said. “57 58 59 60 man hunt!!! Think I see Carson there he is over here.” “Jordon is running to base,” Austin said. “I got Carson.” John said, “Jordon is at the base” “John gets your friends’ dinner,” John’s dad said. “Coming,” John yelled. “Wait. Who’s that walking on the side walk? Let's go see who it is,” Jordon said. “Hey what are you doing here?” John said. “Wait. What is that?” Carson said.
“Run” Austin said. They ran inside the hose and shut the door close as hard as they could. John told his mom dad, “Mom. Dad. There’s a zombie outside,” John said. “Stop joking around John,” mom said. “We’re not kidding around,” John said. “Ok I’ll go check it out,” John’s dad said. John’s dad did not come back in until 30 min later. “There was nothing out there John, “dad said.
It’s Sunday. Austin is at John’s house. John’s mom walked in to the room and changed the channel to Fox news. “Should we tell everyone at school?” John said. “Yes. But they’re not going to believe us,” Austin said. Fox news reporter said, “We are down by nuclear power plant where it seems to have exploded. Every one survived. Wait one person did not survive. Back to you Joe.” “Wait. That’s how it started,” John said. “Should we go over there? That might be its weakness. Everyone has a weakness.”
They rode their bikes down to the nuclear power plant. Zombies were everywhere. They could not get there without being attacked by zombies. They rushed to the nearest house and they were banging on the door. They tried to open it but it was locked. John found a lock pick on the floor and they used it to pick the lock. The door opened but the house was abandoned. They went in the house. They were one block away from the power plant but the zombies were everywhere. They were coming to the house. A person grabbed us by the faces and said, “Stay quiet and stay away from the window.” He said that because there was a zombie at the window. He asked where we going and we were said we were going down to the nuclear power plant to see if we can stop the zombies. He said, “Yes. There is something down there. Just wait until it is morning.”
They waited to the morning and they looked out the window. The block was almost clear and they ran down to the power plant. Then John trip and then woke up by falling of the bed. He went down stars and then he saw a car pull out of the drive way. Austin just rang doorbell. “Oh no,” John said. “Not again.”
I choose my fiction story because it feels like it was my best piece. Creating a good character is important. The main character was John. He had blue hair and blue eyes and he always wore a sweatshirt. The sweatshirt was blue and it had a zipper. Austin had red hair and brown eyes.
Authors create setting. The setting was at John’s house and in his development. The story map is my character’s desires to stop the zombies and to get to nuclear power plant. The obstacle that was in my character’s way was zombies. The zombies where guarding the nuclear power plant. The climax was when they went down to the nuclear power plant and they can’t get there because there is too many zombies and when they can’t get in the house because it is locked.
My resolution was when it was morning and they ran down to the nuclear power plant to get what was ever down there and John tripped and fell out of his bed and went down stairs and he hear the doorbell rings and it was Austin and John said, “Oh no”.
I have improved as a writer. I have more confidence. I feel comfortable writing longer pieces. I understand the parts an author needs to write fiction. I enjoy writing more.
It is Saturday. John woke up in his room and got ready. John had brown hair and blues eyes. He wore his sweatshirt and went down stairs. He asked his mom if he can have Austin over.
“Ok John,” mom said.
Austin’s mom pulled up the drive way and Austin ran to the door. John opened the door and he came in the house. “Austin do you want anyone else to come over,” John said.
“Ok. How about Carson and Jordon?” Austin said.
“Ok I will go ask my mom,” John said. “Hey you both are here already,” John said.
“So what do you want to do?” Austin said.
“How about manhunt?” Jordon said.
“Sure,” Carson said.
“Ok. The teams are me and Austin and Carson and Jordon. Austin and I will be hunter. Go hide” John said. “57 58 59 60 man hunt!!! Think I see Carson there he is over here.”
“Jordon is running to base,” Austin said. “I got Carson.”
John said, “Jordon is at the base”
“John gets your friends’ dinner,” John’s dad said.
“Coming,” John yelled.
“Wait. Who’s that walking on the side walk? Let's go see who it is,” Jordon said.
“Hey what are you doing here?” John said.
“Wait. What is that?” Carson said.
“Run” Austin said. They ran inside the hose and shut the door close as hard as they could. John told his mom dad, “Mom. Dad. There’s a zombie outside,” John said.
“Stop joking around John,” mom said.
“We’re not kidding around,” John said.
“Ok I’ll go check it out,” John’s dad said.
John’s dad did not come back in until 30 min later. “There was nothing out there John, “dad said.
It’s Sunday. Austin is at John’s house. John’s mom walked in to the room and changed the channel to Fox news. “Should we tell everyone at school?” John said.
“Yes. But they’re not going to believe us,” Austin said. Fox news reporter said, “We are down by nuclear power plant where it seems to have exploded. Every one survived. Wait one person did not survive. Back to you Joe.”
“Wait. That’s how it started,” John said. “Should we go over there? That might be its weakness. Everyone has a weakness.”
They rode their bikes down to the nuclear power plant. Zombies were everywhere. They could not get there without being attacked by zombies. They rushed to the nearest house and they were banging on the door. They tried to open it but it was locked. John found a lock pick on the floor and they used it to pick the lock. The door opened but the house was abandoned. They went in the house. They were one block away from the power plant but the zombies were everywhere. They were coming to the house. A person grabbed us by the faces and said, “Stay quiet and stay away from the window.” He said that because there was a zombie at the window. He asked where we going and we were said we were going down to the nuclear power plant to see if we can stop the zombies. He said, “Yes. There is something down there. Just wait until it is morning.”
They waited to the morning and they looked out the window. The block was almost clear and they ran down to the power plant. Then John trip and then woke up by falling of the bed. He went down stars and then he saw a car pull out of the drive way. Austin just rang doorbell. “Oh no,” John said. “Not again.”
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